User:Venrenerd/San Moisè, Venice/Nycgirl00 Peer Review

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@venrenerd
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:San Moisè, Venice:

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Stronger first two sentences. The second sentence is hard to follow grammatically.

Content: The descriptions of the interior and exterior of the church is good. Maybe add some more facts about the church if you can find them?

Tone: Tone is neutral, which is good.

Sources: Need more sources.

Organization: Well organized and easy to follow. Maybe add a subsection regarding the history of the church.

Images: Add more images.