User:Venturca/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Ventura Fault

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it was in the list of articles we could evaluate, and it is about the Ventura Fault, and Ventura is a cool town that I've been through before and I like it.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section

-Good, simple, lead section, that explains what the Ventura Fault is

-Good information, and connecting information to how the Ventura Fault connects to other near by faults

-Could use more information on lead

Content-Article maintains neutral point of view, however not enough information, only includes small amount of tsunami info

-could use more info on town, past earthquakes, history, etc.

Tone

-Neutral tone

References

-Could use more scientific references, right now only journal articles

-Links do work

Images

-One small image, could be bigger

-Image of town would be nice

Writing Quality

-Good, need more sources, images, and information

Overall Impression

-Good start, needs more information, and overall article needs to be filled in better with more sections, resources, and images.