User:VerdantAurum/Ethnic identity development/Bedrum00 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

VerdantAurum


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:VerdantAurum/Ethnic identity development
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ethnic identity development

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like your section to be added! I think it could be beneficial to go in and add more details regarding SIT and SCT since that is something that may not be commonly known to any readers. I also suggest maybe not using as many acronyms because it gets a little difficult to keep track of them all while reading the section. I think it would also be interesting to go more into detail about the statement "...and more so on their content -what it means to the person and it's impact on said person.". I think that this article is interesting and that your contributions are useful and meaningful. Everything you have drafted and clear and concise but, there are a few small spelling/grammatical errors here and there. All of your information seems up-to-date and is neutrally presented. Great job!