User:VerdantAurum/Ethnic identity development/RJSteed Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

VerdantAurum


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:VerdantAurum/Ethnic identity development


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ethnic identity development

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello Verdant, this is Rio. After reviewing the ethnic identity development article, I have some suggestions that you may (or may not) want to use. Adding a section that briefly describes the independent development patterns of various ethnic groups could be a good idea. Also, the Positives and negatives associated with these developmental patterns could also be made into a topic or subtopic.--~