User:VernM22/Comparison of birth control methods/AshleyWombacher Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

VernM22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:VernM22/Comparison_of_birth_control_methods?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Comparison of birth control methods

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The introduction paragraph doesn't have any changes
 * Seems like a lot of detail about condoms for an overview- maybe that part can be shortened or cut out entirely and discussed within the article's body
 * The CDC source is a great one! I think you should definitely add more sources to your list so you can have more information
 * I didn't see any changes made from the original article just that it was copied and pasted. I like the article body layout and the different sections- I think that is a good addition to the article once it's filled out more!