User:VeronicaReynolds1/Alyne Harris/Ella.zubieni Peer Review

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Yes Veronica!! I think this is a great start! For starters, it's a very good overview of a general look at who she was and what she did. You get a great idea of where her inspiration comes from and how that contributes to where she is today. The intro is great (it also made me realize I forgot to do mine haha), and it's simplicity is perfect. The content all seems very up to date. The sources all seem good too. A few pieces of information I might add (if it's available) are things like, what are the names of her siblings? Is there anymore information about them or her life growing up? Is there more information on her children or husband? Just like any more information about her home life is what I'm wondering about. Also though, I know some of this info is SUPER hard to find especially if they're still alive so I understand if that's a little difficult to do. Another potential idea: could you add some of her most famous paintings and like describe them briefly? Like maybe that could be a section or something if you're trying to look for something else to pull in? Overall, this is a GREAT and very informative base. Alyne honestly seems like such a cool person and it was very intriguing to read about. You're doing awesome Veronica! You slay!