User:Veronica George 10/Blue-lined octopus/Kiyana929 Peer Review

General info

 * Veronica George
 * User:Veronica George 10/sandbox

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Veronica George does well in defining the Blue Lined Octopus in her Wiki Article. The article is well sourced and linked to other websites and definitions. The voice in the article is neutral and does not spark any controversial claims as it is distinctly informative.  The article could have more subtitles and information on things like physical characteristics in its own paragraph. Such as making it subtitle anatomy and physiology and then writing about size, and external characteristics.   Other information that could be put in is habitat, lifecycle, and possible evolution. The octopus has a lot of potential information that the article could use.  Adding an image of the octopus in the beginning of the article could also be helpful to the reader.  This article just needs a few more sources on the life of the Lined Octopus. I found it very interesting that Wiki did not have much on Blue Lined Octopus’, thus I think this is a great start to the article.
 * Great work!