User:Veronica George 10/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: Briley Brothers
 * Article Evaluation:
 * This article is about a sibling trio involved in a murder and robbery spree that happened in 1979. They went on a killing spree that left 11 dead and 2 survivors. They were able to escape prison (death row at that) but were captured three weeks later. One of the brothers was executed in 1984, but the other two brothers remain alive and incarcerated in prison.
 * There is one detail of the article that needs clarification according to the Talk page.
 * Some phrasing is confusing. I could re-work sentences.
 * Confused about James Dyral Briley Sr's role in the murder? Needs clarification.
 * Shooting of Orline Christain can be clarified
 * Overall, this article has mostly syntaxing issues which I could help with by just rearranging words and re-writing.
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 * Article title: Eggs Benedict
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article has a lot of contributions to the Talk page, which makes me feel like there are more delegated tasks that I can actually complete. It seems more organized and laid out for me than the last article. Here are some examples of issues:
 * -Sourcing "egg McMuffin" from Mcdonalds in a sentence about eggs benny.
 * -Confusion around original recipe of eggs Benedict
 * -Controversy over whether English muffins are american or english
 * -Image not adequate
 * So, while this topic doesn't interest me as much as other ones, I do think that the Talk page is more elaborate than others. It seems like there is a community here, with clear instructions for tasks that need to be completed.
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 * So, while this topic doesn't interest me as much as other ones, I do think that the Talk page is more elaborate than others. It seems like there is a community here, with clear instructions for tasks that need to be completed.
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Option 3

 * Article title: John Smith
 * Article Evaluation:
 * This man was accused of killing both his wives (can you tell I have an interest in serial killers)? This also interests me a lot more than the eggs Benedict thing, but the Talk page has only one person and I'm not sure where I could even start on this article to be honest. I don't know why it was graded so low and what needs to be done to fix it.
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