User:VeronikaRoberts33/Sarah Tyson Rorer/Najohnson21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

VeronikaRoberts33


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Sarah Tyson Rorer


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Evaluate the drafted changes
The drafted changes to this article include one sentence: "Sarah Tyson Rorer was a newspaper columnist for magazines like Table Talk Magazine, Household New, Ladies Home Journal, and Good House Keeping." with a citation from Pennsylvania City for the Book. Overall, this information is new to the article and presents background information highlighting what made Sarah Rorer interested in home economics/dietetics. The information is concise, simple, and straight-forward. The citation is also done correctly and from a reliable source. The sentence is a good addition to the article as it relates to the material on how/why Sarah became the first dietitian. It is a fairly simple edit that requires little to no edits, and minimal feedback.