User:VetMedIsLife7/Community (ecology)/Tvu27 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:VetMedIsLife7/Community_%28ecology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

I think that stating why it's important to understand the origin, maintenance, etc. of species diversity could be important, as well. Overall, I think the edits add new information to the article very well.

Content

The edits are very up to date with the world today and they are also well-written.

Tone and Balance

The tone is neutral and not biased in any way. The edits only add information, not try to convince the readers of a certain viewpoint, which is good.

Sources and References

The sources are credible, but I think the references should be formatted like how Wikipedia articles usually format them (like with a number in the superscript and a link to the references section.)

Organization

The content is well written and easy to understand.

3/23/23 10:32am: Thank you for the feedback! Yes, I have not fully formatted the references as I will in the final article. I will make sure to correct the formatting before publishing! -VetMedIsLife7