User:Vferreiraa12/Blue jellyfish/Karaganr1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like your comparison on the blue jellyfish vs the lion's mane jellyfish. I would work on tightening up your sentences. For example, "It is more likely to find these jellyfish in the warmer months across the UK coast" could be phrased differently. I would say " Blue jellyfish are usually found across the UK coast, during the warmer months. Also stay away from abbreviations such as "UK." I would put United Kingdom. "Their tentacles will sting to capture their prey" could be phrased like " They use their tentacles to sting, in order to capture their prey." References look good.