User:Vguan1/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Health survival paradox

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose this article to examine gender disparities and differences in society. I thought it would interesting to see what differences exist and for what reason and/or factors contributed to them.

Evaluate the article
Clear headings and lead sections/structures. but organization is not clear. Coverage is neutral, in that it presents information in a non-biased fashion. Could again be organized better where Influential factors are positioned after male morbidity advantage.

However, article needs more sources to support its claims, such as the following statements below. It also needs to be elaborated, the article is labeled as confusing or unclear to some readers. It needs more systematic review articles to again support the claims.

Under male morbidity advantage title.

"Women have more psychological disorders than men."

Adjust to: "Women have more psychological disorders than men due to difference in societal roles. The disparity of responsibilities--where men tend to occupy more stable positions versus women who tend to engage in more nurturing roles--contributes differences in mental health and morbidity."