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Suggested edits for Bullet #3 on Wikipedia MoS:

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 * Section organization: Initial summary can be shorter. Topics such as papules/plaques on abdomen and skin distention can maybe go into topics such as signs/symptoms and dermatological cause. Otherwise introducing new material/studies in intro, which can possibly clash with info in relevant topic sections.
 * Maybe add subsections in treatment for each type. Corticosteroid ointments, IM injection of whole blood, antihistamine, and then nonpharmacological treatments--> pine tar, cold showers, iced cloths (citation?)
 * Make sure certain words, that may not be common, can be linked to another article that defines the term (i.e. estradiol, collagen(?), gestations, primigravida-even though you did define this term in parentheses).
 * Consistent with manual of style.

Health Survival Paradox Edits

"Overall, men and women are affected by mental disorders at similar rates, but men and women are diagnosed with different kinds of disorders at different rates. For example, men are more prone to experience substance abuse, whereas women are more prone to be diagnosed with depression and anxiety disorders. "

''Change to bolded sentence because new citation (previous citation led to nothing, not even scientific journal--pointed out during review). Possibly change first sentence because it also doesn't make any sense.''

A review on substance-use disorder observed sex/gender differences on the biology, epidemiology, and treatment of substance-use disorder. Women were generally afflicted with more severe adverse events, but prognosis after treatment between men and women did not differ. Future studies are needed to confirm whether biological and environmental constituents impact gender/sex differences on substance-use disorder.

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