User:Vhn26/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Academy at Palumbo

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
This was my high school located in Philadelphia. There are many qualities and accomplishments (as well as historical facts) about this high school that I do not see listed in this Wikipedia article.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section:

The lead section successfully explains the brief background of the Academy at Palumbo and where it is located.

Content:

The content is relevant to the topic, however, it is not up-to-date. It is missing historical facts about the building and the detailed explanation of the high school. It only lists previous accomplishments.

Tone and Balance:

The tone of the article is neutral and informational - it is not bias.

Sources and References:

All the facts provided in the article are backed up by reliable secondary sources. The sources are diverse, but there are more current sources to include.

Organization and Writing Quality:

The article is clear, but not categorized into organized sections. While there are no major grammatical errors, there are areas that could be better articulated.

Images and Media:

There are a total of 8 images in the article, and a map. The images are of the exterior of the high school's building, but are not captioned to reflect that. The map locates the area of where the building is located in Philadelphia.

Talk Page Discussion:

There's not much discussion active in the talk page.

Overall Impression:

Overall, the article has a good start - but could be tweaked to reflect the current state of the high school.