User:Vi.tongnu/sandbox

"Alexander the Great, who was also known as Alexander III of Macedone, was one of the greatest military, who was the king of Macedonia and Persia. He established the largest and the strongest empire in the world. At the age of 16, he succeeded and took charge of the throne and had a powerful and experienced army. Alexander the Great had been in uncountable battles and tried to make the world a better place. His life is such interesting and he made such big impact on people's lives at the time."

Evaluations
==1/30/2018 Evaluation by User:kyehen/ == Spelling/ Grammar: Meets standard. No spelling mistakes, or outright grammar issues.

Language: Nearly meets standard. The first sentenced can be work shopped a bit, as of now, it’s pretty clunky.

Organization: Meets standard. I’m assuming this is being added to a page’s section, so it doesn’t really need a section in your sandbox. I could be wrong though.

Coding: Meets standard.

Validity: Does not meet standard. Information not cited, the rubric states you need at least three valid sources. Also, that last sentence seems biased.

Completeness: Nearly meets standard. Needs sources.

Relevance: Nearly meets standard. All information seems relevant, but the last sentence can be reworked.

Sources: Does not meet standard. No sources listed.

Citations: Does not meet standard. No work is cited.

References: Does not meet standard. No references.

Spelling/Grammar
Meets standard. I believe that it is "Alexander III of Macedon", not "Macedone". Also, in the last sentence change "such interesting" to "so interesting" and also you need to add an "a" in between "such big" too if you keep that sentence.

Language
Nearly meets standard. A lot of the paragraph feels too informal and also shows your own opinion, which you shouldn't do in a Wikipedia article. Namely the sentence "His life is such interesting and he made such big impact on people's lives at the time."

Organization
Nearly meets standard. Needs a heading if being added to a page, and the context for where this would be entered would be nice but otherwise fine.

Coding
Meets standard. Again, needs heading but also lacking references as a whole.

Validity
Meets standard. Small paragraph, like it's supposed to be for this assignment, but also concise.

Completion
Nearly meets standard. Lacking references entirely.

Relevance
Nearly meets standard. All information seems to be based on the topic on hand, but the last sentence needs to be reworked by removing your opinion and saying why he made a big impact if he did.