User:Victoria.reeves1997/Cultivation theory/Chandler7talbot Peer Review

General info
Victoria Reeves 1997
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 * User:Victoria.reeves1997/Cultivation theory
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 * Cultivation theory:

Evaluate the drafted changes
-I am able to see the addings you have made to the article very clear. Thank you for bolding your adding information and underlining it to make it easily visible.

-The article you chose looks like it was already a decent one, but you did a great job adding important information.

-Great job with looking up research for the television section and adding great facts.

-Very concise, great job.

-Did you add your sources and did you cite your added information as well? It looks like you did not cite them from my end, so make sure you do that if it is not already done.

-If you find supporting reserch to add in the dramatic violence and sexual attitudes section, maybe add a little bit.

-I think your work is very effective and clearly stated in your rough draft.