User:Victoriaemoran/Sex-selective abortion/Cryssipoo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Victoriaemoran


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Victoriaemoran/Sex-selective abortion - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sex-selective abortion - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The content added improves the article because it adds detail to information that was previously in the article. The information added strengthens the article because it is very relevant to what is being discussed and it provides detail. The content is neutral while providing a better understanding of the topic.