User:Victorialbowles1042/Publication bias/Kitterbitter160 Peer Review

General info
User:Victorialbowles1042/Publication bias
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Victorialbowles1042/Publication_bias?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Publication bias

Evaluate the drafted changes
LEAD/SECTION HEADING

Lead for the section? added or new section-Sounds like it will be placed in the complex example section.

CONTENT

Explain how publication bias affects reproducibility in the beginning of the paragraph, then give the example, it sounds smoother. this also sounds more over reproducibility then how bias affects reproducibility.

Add references, make sure to do it through wiki as it makes it easy for you. Try to keep it in 3rd person, no "you, we, I, they"? I don't know if this is a rule or not for wikipedia. Most journals want articles in 3rd person.

I think this is a good sub-sub-section for the complex example section.

MORE IN-DEPTH

" Although it is found that replication within species and systems is so rare, it is important that measures and emphasis is put on the need for replication in studies of ecology and evolutionary biology. "    Citation needed

--written very confusingly, try

" Though it is rare to see replications within ecology and evolutionary biology, it is important to put emphasis on....."

" Reproducibility is one of the most important aspects of science, as it is important that what you are putting out there is able to be reproduced and have someone else get the results you did."

sounds a little wordy, try

"Reproducibility is one of the most important aspects of science. It is important to know that data uploaded is easily replicable because....."

".... policies, as that (this) could rapidly change..."

"Although prior endeavors have been made in the fields of ecology and evolutionary biology, there is still a noticeable absence of a comprehensive framework for evaluating the degree to which various types of publication bias may skew the accuracy of true effect estimates."

Run on sentence. What kind of prior private endeavors? (provide citation)

Try word tune to shorten sentences! I use it for a lot of my papers, you have 20 free edits daily and is free to use. Hope this peer review helps!