User:VikingVeteran/West African mythology/Elen Benfelen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

VikingVeteran


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:VikingVeteran/West African mythology


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * West African mythology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead includes a clear and concise description of the article. The author could add that the myths are found in folklore stories.

Content: The content added is relevant to the topic as it provides a list of stories related to the West African region.

Tone and Balance: Tone is neutral and unbiased

Sources and References: One reference is provided for the folklore list; other sources may be beneficial. Source reflects the topic. No citations added. Links work and are relevant.

Organization: The information provided is clear and easy to read—no grammar or spelling errors.

Images and Media: No images or media added to the article.

Overall: The information added is beneficial to the article. Don't forget to remove the notes to self within the article. You can add a citation to the book for the Scarecrow story even if the book is unavailable online. I don't think listing the West African countries is necessary as there is a link in the lead that gives full detail on the 17 countries considered West Africa. The list of folklore is an excellent addition to the wiki page on West African Myth.