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Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: Dark soy sauce
 * Article Evaluation: The article only contain the brief introduction and the origin of the name without the lead. The article is unbiased but underrepresented. There should add more sections about such as history, uses, and benefits. Besides, the article cites some resources from the press or the website that might not reliable and convincing. Overall, the article is stub status and low importance.
 * Sources:
 * Huansong Wang, Andrew M. Jenner, Chung-Yung J. Lee, Guanghou Shui, Soon Yew Tang, Matthew Whiteman, Markus R. Wenk & Barry Halliwell (2007) The identification of antioxidants in dark soy sauce, Free Radical Research, 41:4, 479-488, DOI: 10.1080/10715760601110871
 * Zhang Xichun & Zhang Min’ai (2009) Protective role of dark soy sauce against acrylamide-induced neurotoxicity in rats by antioxidative activity, Toxicology Mechanisms and Methods, 19:5, 369-374, DOI: 10.1080/15376510902806167
 * Huansong Wang, Andrew M. Jenner, Chung-Yung J. Lee, Guanghou Shui, Soon Yew Tang, Matthew Whiteman, Markus R. Wenk & Barry Halliwell (2007) The identification of antioxidants in dark soy sauce, Free Radical Research, 41:4, 479-488, DOI: 10.1080/10715760601110871
 * Zhang Xichun & Zhang Min’ai (2009) Protective role of dark soy sauce against acrylamide-induced neurotoxicity in rats by antioxidative activity, Toxicology Mechanisms and Methods, 19:5, 369-374, DOI: 10.1080/15376510902806167

Option 2

 * Article title: SM Entertainment
 * Article Evaluation: For the beginning part, the lead is good that contain all subtitles. The introduction part could be improved to be more concise. Then, the article is biased which praised the company too much. Also, there are lots of information are out-of-dated, such as the date of some controversies contracts and revenue data of the company.
 * Sources: Penetration Strategies of SM Entertainment in Global Market. koreascience.or.kr/article/ArticleFullRecord.jsp?cn=OTSBB9_2014_v13n3_77.
 * Sources: Penetration Strategies of SM Entertainment in Global Market. koreascience.or.kr/article/ArticleFullRecord.jsp?cn=OTSBB9_2014_v13n3_77.
 * Sources: Penetration Strategies of SM Entertainment in Global Market. koreascience.or.kr/article/ArticleFullRecord.jsp?cn=OTSBB9_2014_v13n3_77.

Option 3

 * Article title: Arabi Sheep
 * Article Evaluation: The article includes concise introduction of Arabi sheep and some characteristics of the sheep. However, these characteristics are not well-organized, since it combined some history about Arabi sheep into characteristics sections. Also, there is no copyright problem but the article needs to link and add more images about Arabi sheep. Besides, even though the article cites some useful references but it did not include the information in the source completely or appropriately.
 * Sources: Karami. “Polymorphisms of the Prion Protein Gene Arabi Sheep Breed in Iran.” African Journal Of Biotechnology, vol. 10, no. 70, Sept. 2011, doi:10.5897/ajb10.1780.
 * Sources: Karami. “Polymorphisms of the Prion Protein Gene Arabi Sheep Breed in Iran.” African Journal Of Biotechnology, vol. 10, no. 70, Sept. 2011, doi:10.5897/ajb10.1780.
 * Sources: Karami. “Polymorphisms of the Prion Protein Gene Arabi Sheep Breed in Iran.” African Journal Of Biotechnology, vol. 10, no. 70, Sept. 2011, doi:10.5897/ajb10.1780.

Option 4

 * Article title: Carbon Power Plant
 * Article Evaluation: At the beginning of the article, there is a brief and concise summary of the article. The article is within the scope of WikiProject Energy. But there is no lead for each following sections. Also, the cited resources are not up-dated and most of them are from ten years ago. Furthermore, the article could include some mechanical and technical knowledge about the Carbon Power Plant and related history of it.
 * Sources: Merkel, Tim C., et al. “Power Plant Post-Combustion Carbon Dioxide Capture: An Opportunity for Membranes.” Journal of Membrane Science, Elsevier, 4 Nov. 2009, www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0376738809007832.
 * Sources: Merkel, Tim C., et al. “Power Plant Post-Combustion Carbon Dioxide Capture: An Opportunity for Membranes.” Journal of Membrane Science, Elsevier, 4 Nov. 2009, www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0376738809007832.
 * Sources: Merkel, Tim C., et al. “Power Plant Post-Combustion Carbon Dioxide Capture: An Opportunity for Membranes.” Journal of Membrane Science, Elsevier, 4 Nov. 2009, www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0376738809007832.

Option 5

 * Article title: Beijing Haidian International School
 * Article Evaluation: The article only consists the introduction part of the school without image, and also is not well-organized. Also, some of the reference link do not valid now. The article is under the scope of WikiProject China. The article is in the stub-class and could be improved by adding more resources about the programs and related-faculty members in the school.
 * Sources: renewed reference link https://haidianinternationalschools.com/about-us-1
 * Sources: renewed reference link https://haidianinternationalschools.com/about-us-1
 * Sources: renewed reference link https://haidianinternationalschools.com/about-us-1