User:Vin2513/History of lacrosse/ElijahBorges Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Vin2513


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 * User:Vin2513/History of lacrosse
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * History of lacrosse

Evaluate the drafted changes
The added paragraph gives good insight into the effects rituals can have, and how lacrosse impacted many cultures from it's origins of a native american sport and war-like ritual, up to now in current times. The sources and references used in the bibliography are also sound and are verifiable.