User:Vincentg1236/Religious intolerance/Cube Wang Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username) Vincentg1236
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Vincentg1236/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Yes
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? Yes
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? No, the information is just fine

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes, the content is relevent to the topic.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Yes, the content is up-to-date.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? No, the content is complete.
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? The article do deal with some equity gaps, the address does related to historically underrepresented topics.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes, the content been added neutral.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No, it did not biased toward any particular position.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No, the viewpoints are fair.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No, the content did not try to persuade the reader.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? No, the article did not have sources.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? No, the article did not have sources.
 * Are the sources current? No, the article did not have sources.
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible? No, the article did not have sources.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? No, the article did not have sources.

Sources and references evaluation
The article did not have sources and it should be added.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes, it clear and easy to read.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? For now, nothing wrong with grammer.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? The organization is fine, but need some improvement.

Organization evaluation
I believe the editor did not very familiar with how to separate different text correctly, if this can be fixed, the organization is fine.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?