User:Vincentooi808/Blended learning/Wombatsaregreat Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Vincentooi808


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Vincentooi808/Blended_learning?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Blended learning

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your lead summarizes blended learning in a manner that is easy to understand and outlines what readers will be learning about, and your article is organized very neatly! I appreciate the detail you go into. I would add citations to claims such as "Blended instruction is reportedly more effective than purely face-to-face or purely online classes. Blended learning methods can also result in high levels of student achievement more effective than face-to-face learning." and would fix the formatting in Institutions/Organizations Using the Blended Learning Model, in addition to cleaning up encyclopedia language and removing bits such as "According to the scholarly source “Shift happens: online education as a new paradigm in learning” by Linda Harasim, an article that covers an overview on the history of online education as well as a framework for understanding the type of need it addresses, the concept of distance learning has already been invented for many centuries." I would also add more citations to the historical background you give for each subsection. For the advantages and disadvantages, just remember to remove your MLA in-text citations and back it up with evidence. Great job!