User:Vinceo0316/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Weight loss coaching

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose this article because I am passionate about fitness, and I've been on my own weight loss journey for a while.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

Lead section: I think the opening paragraph of the article was worded weirdly, making it hard to comprehend the first time reading over it. There was a basic definition of weight loss coaching, but also some added points that took away from the main focus.

Content: The article has some history of coaching, and then some methods of coaching. I feel like the methods given could have been more in depth or backed up by more sources.

Tone: Article is pretty neutral

Sources: The sources worked and had info related to the article on them

Writing quality: I think this article could have been rewritten to sound more professional and put together. Some parts were wordy and hard to understand. There wasn't many things that peeked my interest or made me want to research more

Images: No images

Talk page: There are some edits listed on the talk page, and updated links

Overall: This article has some potential, but it need a lot of work. Some updated links, images, and different writing format would probably be beneficial.