User:Vinceo0316/Weight loss coaching/Kayap1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Vinceo0316


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Vinceo0316/Weight_loss_coaching?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead is steady and gives a good overview of the topic chosen

There could be more content added with more souces

The content that is added goes with the rest of the article

Well Written

Could use some separation

The information found and used has reliable sources