User:Vinie007/2

Gent Strazimiri


Ruhrfisch comments: Thanks for working on this interesting article, here are some suggestions for improvement.
 * A model article is useful for ideas and examples to follow. There are many Biography FAs at Category:FA-Class biography articles for some model articles
 * The lead should be an accessible and inviting overview of the whole article. Nothing important should be in the lead only - since it is a summary, it should all be repeated in the body of the article itself
 * My rule of thumb is to include every header in the lead in some way. Please see WP:LEAD
 * Internet refs need URL, title, author if known, publisher and date accessed. cite web and other cite templates may be helpful. See WP:CITE and WP:V
 * The article has lots of little typos - "He entersed the race with several years of political experience ..." (entered) or "During 2002 and 2005 he was the adcisor to the president ..." (advisor) - and needs a copyedit.

Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). I do not watch peer reviews, so if you have questions or comments, please contact me on my talk page. Yours, Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 05:17, 4 June 2011 (UTC)