User:Violet5612/Gender roles in childhood/Greeenjungleee Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) User: Violet5612


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * - Boseley, Sarah (20 September 2017). "Children are straitjacketed into gender roles in early adolescence, says study". The Guardian.
 * - Appel, M., and Weber, S. (2017). Do mass mediated stereotypes harm members of negatively stereotyped groups? a meta-analytical review on media-generated stereotype threat and stereotype lift. Commun. Res. doi: 10.1177/0093650217715543.
 * - Gender Identity and Gender Confusion in Children. (11 May 2013). HealthyChildren.org. Retrieved September 28, 2021
 * - Chi, J. (November 5, 2018). The importance of gender in early childhood education policy. Brookings. Retrieved September 28, 2021
 * - Strauss, E. (April 2018). "Why girls can be boyish but boys can't be girlish". CNN.
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * - none

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

It is looking good, but I found a website link that it is not working. Here is the link, https://www.cnn.com/2018/04/12/health/boys-girls-gender-norms-parenting-strauss/index.html.. Make sure to check it before you post with this link. Your comment has a good points and it is very clearly.