User:Violetzq/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Code Kunst


 * Article Evaluation
 * The lead is ok and the article is basically unbiased, but it is oversimplified and more of his history can be included. There are a lot information about this person's songs and albums, but the contents are outdated. And as a bibliography, more details about this person are needed. Can also add more visuals, the resources for this article also needs to be checked.


 * Sources
 * https://twitter.com/codekunst18
 * https://www.aomgofficial.com/codekunst

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Chrome Hearts


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article includes a concise history of the Chrome Hearts as a brand, but it does include a lot of recent informations. No one left any edits on the talk page. More academic sources can be included for this article. Many of the contents like "boutiques" are written very briefly. The article mostly just talked about the Chromes Hearts in New York, but there are also other Chrome Hearts stores in Japan and other countries, so they need to be included as well. More images can also be included
 * Sources
 * Chrome Hearts Buys Licensee, Alexandra Steigrad; BACCARAT, CHROME HEARTS TEAM U

Option 3

 * Article title
 * AOMG


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is a start-class. The article needs additional citations for verification, and some of the sources used in the article are not reliable. The "key people" part needs to be modified and include more details about how they are important to this company. More up-to-date information are needed for this article.


 * Sources
 * https://www.billboard.com/articles/columns/k-town/6274257/jay-park-aomg-us-tour-simon-d-gray-loco-dj-pumpkin

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Eyewear


 * Article Evaluation
 * There's only a lead for this article. More contents and sub-categories like lenses, protective eye-wear, and eyewear industries can be included in the article. More images can also be included to add the visuals for the article. Also, there is no citation included, and there is no reliable sources either. There is no information on the talk page.


 * Sources
 * Vision aids in America : a social history of eyewear and sight correction since 1900; "Eyewear Location Apparatus" in Patent Application Approval Process

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Edison Chen (EP)


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is rated as Stub, no other editors has edited it before. There are no images in this article so that might be improved. The article also needs much more details and sources. The tone is neutral but there is no description of contents included in this article, some more external links can be included as well. There's just overall not enough information to this article.


 * Sources
 * Sources
 * external source:https://baike.baidu.com/item/%E9%99%88%E5%86%A0%E5%B8%8C/147585?fr=aladdin