User:Virginia.Marshall/Georgia O'Keefe/Shannonmullaley Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Virginia.Marshall


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Virginia.Marshall/Georgia O'Keefe


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Georgia O'Keeffe

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this article draft is really good so far, I believe the information in the lead is well-put and up today as far as I can tell. The information has been followed up with supporting references as well. The information is well-organized and I did not notice any soiling or grammatical errors. This draft adds a lot to the existing Wikipedia page, by providing further insight to Georgia O'Keefe's life and her work. The only thing I would change would be addressing O'Keefe more at the beginning of the paragraphs instead of "she" to ensure the reader knows who specifically the article is talking about.