User:Virgocat444/sandbox

- The opening paragraph is a good introduction but the rest of the lead is oddly specific and doesn't cater to audience needs in my opinion

- I think it covers the different types of communication well but some paragraphs/sections are out of order

- I do think it needs to expand more on the effects of domestication on cat communication as cat owners are most likely the audience

- I've only made minor changes on this assignment but I do think that it needs major organizational changes and a re-ordering of the sections

- I could organize it based on emotion or intention such as aggressive calls or communication for hunger and then make subsections for vocal, physical, and olfactory communication

- I want to add a section for human socialization and expand on domestication

- I could differentiate between feral and domesticated cats

- I could also differentiate by age of cat by adding a section on communication differences

- I want to add a section on unusual or alarming communication for the cat owners