User:Virtual Virgo/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Digital Revolution

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Digital Revolution is a broad term and I could add a variety of subjects to this page. The page also hap content gaps.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section- Introductory sentence is a run on sentence.

brief description of article? Yes, but it does not give an entire overview of the article mainly focuses on hardware devices.

Include info that is not present in the article? Yes

Concise or overly detailed? No does not mention the social economic impact on in lead

Content is relevant but the weight of information is not equal for example the rise in digital technology is very brief compared to the timeline. And if this article was going in chronological order then, it visits the invention of the internet before it talks about the digital technology use of computer. I think these sections should be reversed.

References seems to be good; they come from scholarly article and creditable websites

I do not see any conversations in the talk page (Except for my comment)

This article needs a lot of work. I think I would work on filling in the content gaps on article that are lacking in examples. Also, the flow of the layout of this page could be a little bit better. Most of all, the leader should include a general statement of what the article entails; both hardware evolution and sociological impact.