User:VivecaFitz/Eumachia/Ibaker5 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Annika Suderberg


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * [Abstract sent via email]


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I know the format of this project is different from the others in the class so the material for the peer review may be a little different. Your topic in general is very interesting and well fit for the class and grounding. I would maybe add more about the history and significance of Eumachia earlier on just so we know its about that specific location and its grounding troubles. I would also add more direct references scholarly work just so the reader knows your analysis is backed up with scholarly evidence, I assume you'll do this in the main draft but maybe directly citing a scholar's name or study within the introduction will legitimize the rest of the work.