User:Vivekpandey23/Libinia spinosa/Mcvickm Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Vivekpandey23


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Vivekpandey23/Libinia spinosa


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 * Does not currently exist.

Evaluate the drafted changes
Looking at the lead paragraph, I think it is good because it touches on every aspect you mention in your article! However, I noticed that is choppy and could maybe use an introductory sentence or two to help introduce the species better. This is something I am still working on myself for my article. Another thing to consider is the sentences that you use in your lead paragraph are almost word for word the sentences used in the content of the article. If possible I would consider trying to paraphrase in the lead to not be repetitive.

I think the description section of the article is good because it clear and describes the organisms physical features. I think you could maybe go into more detail of the appendages and anatomy of the organism, or maybe add that as separate section.

The reproduction is an important section when discussing a species. This section in your article is only one sentence, I think it could use more information. If you are having a hard time finding more information about this organism reproduction I would consider just including the information you have in a different section such as life cycle. This is something I did in my article as well because certain topics I did not have enough information to make it its own section. I would say the same for the 'Ecology' and 'Geography' sections.

The section about the life stages is the strongest part of the article and has the most detail, good job! Overall, I think you are off to a really great start with your article as a whole. I think the topics about your organism will readers a good summary about this species and the sources you got your article from seem reliable!