User:VivianaOsorioDeJesus/Pesticide Poisoning Children's Development/JehlianeC Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

VivianaOsorioDeJesus


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:VivianaOsorioDeJesus/Pesticide Poisoning Children's Development
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like that you added lots of information to your article! What I could say is that you should add the sources you found your information from, but other than that, your article is well written.