User:Vjj18/Royal jelly/Mpankey Peer Review

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Vjj18 and Group
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Royal jelly refers to a substance given by nurse bees to a developing larvae to induce them to develop into queen bees. This is done in concert with the construction of special queen bee cells for the larvae to develop in. Royal jelly has some use in alternative medicine but there is currently no rigorous evidence to support this use.

No sandbox drafts has been posted yet, and therefore there are no changes to review, the focus will instead be on how to improve the existing article.

The existing article is well formatted but several topics from the lead are not mentioned or fully elaborated on in the main article. The use of royal jelly in alternative medicine is missing. A section on what the supposed benefits are and details on why this has generally been rejected by both the FDA and EFSA. A general run through on the information provided would also be helpful as many sources are more the 20 years out of date and may need to be updated. There are several missed opportunities to link to other Wikipedia pages throughout the article too.