User:Vlo1989/Human Impact on the Environment/Pintobean9 Peer Review

General info
Vl01989
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Human impact on the environment
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):::

Evaluate the drafted changes
Add a little introduction to “Human overshoot” (or add section to the bottom so as to not disturb flow)

Overall article has slight persuasive undertone

Could reference some environmentalists or anyone related

Grammar is ok, could use some fine tuning

Links work and are relevant