User:Vmoreno11/Manganese cycle/AngstyArmadillo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Manganese Cycle group - Vmoreno11


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Vmoreno11/Manganese cycle


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Manganese cycle

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This looks like a great start - already well cited, clear, sensible structuring. I'm a little confused what would go under global manganese cycle, that won't be covered by lithosphere/hydrosphere. Make sure you use more than one citation for each section and subsection. For the most part you are already good on that, and I'm sure you'll add more as you fill it out. Great work so far!