User:Vmoreno11/Manganese cycle/Icelover95 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Vmoreno11/Manganese cycle


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Vmoreno11/Manganese_cycle?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

So far, it looks like there is a really comprehensive outline. Breaking the manganese cycle up by "sphere" is really helpful. Including relevant information about the early and anthro effects provides a more comprehensive view.