User:Vmoreno11/Manganese cycle/Stellingkm Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Farrelil, Cassidymwagner, Stonesar, Vmoreno11


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Vmoreno11/Manganese_cycle?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Manganese cycle

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is really coming together - great job! It seems like there is a note about adding an a lead section, I think you could expand a bit on the one that already exists and you'd be good. Otherwise, this article flows really well and is both detailed and very relevant. However, the section on manganese in the early earth and the section on anthropogenic influences could be expanded upon. Organization flows well, but I think adding some pictures to the anthropogenic influences section would help supplement the writing. Make sure to add in links to relevant wikipedia articles. Also, some claims are unattributed, make sure to include citations for everything that needs it. Looks great overall - a notable addition to Wikipedia!