User:Vmrtz/Zulaykha al-Shihabi/Orangetulip12 Peer Review

General info
LilIlyich
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Vmrtz/Zulaykha al-Shihabi
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):None available

Evaluate the drafted changes
There was not much content for me to review, the article is missing mostly everything. It seems like they have quite a number of reputable sources though which is good. The one reference they have has two errors so I would double-check the citation. I believe the citation has "edition" written twice which is one of two errors, but I could not figure out the other one. The body also states "this source," which I don't think is allowed from what I remember. I think we're supposed to paraphrase in our own words, without an explicit reference to the source (but still include the citation). For your references too, I believe they're all supposed to have links to the article, which many are missing, so I would suggest adding them. Overall, I would just suggest writing a complete draft.