User:Voidog/Xylocopa darwini/StabboTheCrabbo Peer Review

General info
==
 * Whose work are you reviewing? Voidog
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Voidog/New sandbox ==

Lead
== Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * No, not necessarily.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Yes.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * No
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * Yes
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
 * Concise. ==

Content
== Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * Yes.
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Yes.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * No. ==

Tone and Balance
== Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?:
 * Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * No
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * No
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * No ==

Sources and References
== Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * No
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * No Sources
 * Are the sources current?
 * No Sources
 * Check a few links. Do they work?
 * No sources listed. ==

Organization
== Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Yes
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * None that I saw.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * Yes. ==

Images and Media
== Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * No images.
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * No images
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * No images
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
 * No images ==

For New Articles Only
== If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable? ==

Overall impressions
== Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * Seems like there's a lot of paraphrasing from the original article. Try and distinguish yours more.
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * Concise and summarizes content well.
 * How can the content added be improved?
 * Add sources and information not present in the original article. ==