User:Voleth Meir/Betsy Gagne/Kmalco13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Voleth Meir


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
It looks like you're off to a great start!

The lead may need another sentence just to bulk it up a bit.

Work on organizing your references section. I believe each one needs a little description about the information being referenced. Also creating a header for the section so it isn't confused with the publications section above it.