User:VonTato23/Climate change denial/Finesslyn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

VonTato23


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:VonTato23/Climate_change_denial?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Climate change denial

Evaluate the drafted changes
I see that some of the sentences in the article could be better worded in your opinion, I think this is a good start.

I also see that you would like to update the information on the article as the last piece of history was from 2018, I agree it would be beneficial to update the information.

Although you seem to have a start, you haven't added any relevant information to the article. I would suggest maybe focusing on certain subcategories on the page with less information such as funding, schools, or false beliefs. I think it would be very interesting and beneficial to the article for you to dive into the schools section in particular.