User:Voolican/Caste system in India/Shriya175 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Voolican


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * voolican's sandbox for 'Caste system in India'
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Caste system in India

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your draft looks great and makes for a good addition to the relatively shorter section on the main article. You make a good transition from the main article's paragraph into your own. However, it may help to copyedit the main article's paragraph to give it more an introductory feel for the rest of the content you have added. Moreover, the paragraph lengths are quite short so it might be more effective to combined the first two and the last two paragraph into one each, and have two total paragraphs for more balance.

The tone of your text is neutral and majority of your sources are recent, making the content up-to-date. Although your sources are great, you might want to add more reliable sources for the lead paragraph from the main article (one of them specifically says 'better source needed). Last but not the least, it is great that you have linked the Wikipedia pages for the movies so the reader can read a brief synopsis!

Overall, your additions are great and relevant for the article.

One Possible Addition

"It was a box-office hit, but is criticized for its upper-caste casting and depiction of Dalits."

After this sentence, you can add information about how Dalits and lower-castes are depicted in popular culture. If any of research focused on why this depiction is arguably harmful, that can also be an insightful addition.