User:Voraspencer/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Andy Schor

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose Mayor Andy Schor because there are gaps within his Wiki page. I also happen to live in Lansing, therefore I think choosing him is relevant to my daily life.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)


 * 1) Are the sources current? -- The content of this article is not up to date.

2. How can the article be improved? -- To improve this article, one can add details about his campaign, stances on major issues, and early life. There is currently 1 sentence regarding his early life and college education

3. The article is well written in the sense that it is easy to comprehend, but there is not nearly enough information that should be in this article.

4. The article does not include images that are useful to the page

5. There is only 1 post in the talk page section written by an unknown author.