User:Vrba223/Suicide in Japan/AJReeve22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Vrba223


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Suicide_in_Japan&diff=1071135800&oldid=1067360580


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Suicide_in_Japan&action=history

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I believe your addition to the article to be placed well chronologically with the rest of the article and very informative. The only change I might recommend is not creating a new paragraph for this statement, as the previous paragraph was already discussing a topic in 2021 as well. This may just be preference, however. Regardless, nice addition!