User:Vrwebre/Carnival/Greenwashed98 Peer Review

peer review suggestions
I would suggestion making sure the citations are correct and present. Seems to be missing a lot of citations.

also, I would suggest either combining the two nola sections or having a second more in depth section on rio. Greenwashed98 (talk) 18:52, 19 May 2023 (UTC)

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