User:Vsmithmartin/Abu Nuwas/Charlottemeans Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Violet Smith-Martin (Vsmithmartin)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Vsmithmartin/Abu_Nuwas?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Abu Nuwas

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Something that I think really strengthened your contribution to the article is the connection to information that is other sections. Although the information you added is different, there is still a connection to the article as a whole. I really like the inclusion of the passages since it directly reflects what you wrote about in the article, and I think it is helpful to see his writing. There don't seem to be any grammatical or spelling errors. You have enough sources, which all seem to be good and support what you have written. I also checked that all the links work which they do. My only questions about the sources is that two of the links go to WorldCat, but there is no way to access the books. Since they are books, I was wondering if you included the link for the purpose of having it in the source, or if when you accessed the sources you were able to through the link? Good work!)