User:Vsmithmartin/Abu Nuwas/Kentwpeters Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Vsmithmartin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Abu Nuwas
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Overall I think that the article does a great job in terms of formatting with informational and titles that allow for easy navigation. Additionally, the content added appears to be well written and the added information about Khamiryyat is very informative. The quote providing a description of wine poetry is a good addition to the article. The information added is written from a neutral perspective without any biases. Although descriptions of poetry can usually come off with a bias, the added details discussing Abu Nuwas' poems are neutral and do not appear to include any assumptions made about the poem's content. The references added are great additions to the article because they effectively back up the evidence listed in the article. After checking all of the added citations, every link appears to work and be properly formatted. All of the sources included are useful because they effectively back up the facts listed in the article. Overall, I feel that all of the information added to the article is properly oriented, interesting, and well backed by the sources cited.