User:Vwaller1/Monument of Aemilius Paullus/ZhengfangZhou Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Vwaller


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Vwaller1/Monument_of_Aemilius_Paullus?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The section—significance of frieze has great detail. Ur contribution adds clarity to the original article. I believe there could be more information abt the grounding of this monument. I also think u could add another section of iconographic analysis to wiki